# It should be Townshend-Moon hooter, not Townsend (11. Bobbyland).
"The full-on Townshend-Moon hooter."
# Alberto drives Hollis East on La Brea. La Brea runs North-South. As they are actually driving East, the right way would be Santa Monica Blvd. followed by a one block drive in La Brea. (11. Bobbyland)
East on Santa Monica.
# The NSA would use an algorithm rather than a logarithm on their data miner... (16. Known Exits)
"then it should be pretty easy to fold an algorithm into the mix"
# Eleggua is written Ellegua once (18. Eleggua's Window).
All now spelled consistently as: Elleggua - double l and double g
pages 93 and 94
# Hollis rents a Passat (The international currency of bad shit) but returns a Jetta (To give them the pleasure). Please give her a Jetta, so she can forget the Phaeton (27 and 53).
"When she'd returned the Passat"
# It should be The Economist rather than the Economist (38. Tubal).
The Economist in italics
# Hollis talks about meeting Alejandro when she has actually met Alberto (45. Breakbulk).
"that Alberto brought me here"
# There's no Sultan of Dubai. Either the Emir of Dubai or the Sultan of Brunei (56. Henry and Richard).
"The Emir of Dubai's public relations team"
# Winchester Silvertips or simply Silvertips. No Remington Silvertips. Remington Accu-tips still sounds horrid (76. Location Shoot).
'Remington Silvertips. Hollowed out.'